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Full title - You Took the Words Right Out of My Mouth.
I'll have to thank Meatloaf for that one :P
I'll also have to thank Sara :iconnighttimebeautiful: for the lovely reference picture.
It was done in watercolour on cold press.
I have to say I like this one a lot personally :)

Critiques


:iconbordombethyname:
Everything about "You Took the Words (Out of My Mouth)" seems to speak of serenity in a period of violence, and you do this with a solid grasp of both art and craft. The background appears stained, contrasting strikingly with her white skin, and the wild waving of her hair contrasts equally brilliantly with the look on her face that, to me, speaks of being overwhelmed by beauty. Your choice of color seems to follow the same thought, with reds all around (speaking of violence and passion), with soft tones of blue (speaking of peace and calm). The look in her eyes is nothing short of awestruck and makes me wonder what she's looking at.

As far as technique goes, it looks incredible. The reds and blues shade perfectly and the browns frame amazingly. My only critiques are with the right half of the nose, and her left ear (which is a bit too low).

Overall an absolutely brilliant painting, painted brilliantly by an absolute artist.
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:iconn1fan:
Ohh I like this one alot :3 Its awesome. I love the colors.
:iconschematree:
Thanks!

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From what I've seen so far, I can't believe my eyes.
:iconweirdoonwheels:
I love how all the colors blend together, and how it looks over-all! You have an amazing talent!

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Third murder’s the charm.

I love insanity, it makes everything better.

Oh, look. The sky is falling, 'bout time, too.

A minute of your time. All I ask.
After that? Oh, you'll be dead then.
:iconwordsmissingmeaning:
this is great, the colours used, especially in the shadows and hair look great

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I am my own
:iconschematree:
Thank you!

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From what I've seen so far, I can't believe my eyes.
:iconnighttimebeautiful:
THE EAAARRRRRRRR.








and ps, hows that present going?
: D

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i am, i am, iam.
:iconschematree:
Not too good sara. about the same as the last time you saw it. I told you it would be done by your birthday though, I'll hold true to that.

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From what I've seen so far, I can't believe my eyes.
:iconnighttimebeautiful:
you better or else i'll murder you!
and ill hold true to THAT.

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i am, i am, iam.
:iconseraphine:
INCREDIBLE! you make me want to break out my watercolours....
the colours go so well together, i love the splotches near her collar bone...
wow

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"No great genius has ever existed without some touch of madness" - Aristotle -

i watch/fav you because i'm intrigued and inspired by your work....do the same for me only for those reasons :D [link]
:iconlivinginthesixties:
aw these colours and layout are stunning 0.0 !!!
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The end of wisdom is to dream high enough not to lose the dream in the seeking of it.

William Faulkner.

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